Showing posts with label taniwha slow writing. Show all posts
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Monday, 29 July 2019

Taniwha slow writing

Today I was learning slow writing where we had to write six sentences about a Taniwha.

I enjoyed thinking of something sharp when I wrote my simile in the first sentence.
I found it challenging to think of an animal to compare the taniwha to.
My digital learning object shows I am a stepping up blogger.
Next time I would change my setting so It's not like the bush.


Razor teeth, as sharp as a butcher knife.

Carefully pouncing like a leopard, to get his kill.

Quickly shaking blood of his BACK!!!

“Hey fish”, come to Papa.”

Claws ripping into the big fat barracuda as he guts it.

Korus plotted around him, so he can be camouflaged.

By Duncan Carmichael     26.6.19