Eel
Dorsal fins flapping out of the water,
Meat getting gulped up,
Harakeke getting used for string,
Feet getting wet.
Tusks popping up out of the water,
Quietly whispering to friends to get more meat,
Murky water flowing fast,
Luring with meat one by one,
Saying “Goodbye” to the big brown Eels.
By Duncan
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