Kia ora. I am Cassidy from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked your photoshopped picture, it was very well made and pretty believable. Keep up the good work! I learnt that your dad is a pilot. Do you usually go on flights with him? If so, do you have fun? Maybe you could make the background up in the clouds next time to make it seem you're in the sky. Please visit my blog here
Hello there. I am Panth from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like how you put effort in your work. I found out how well you introduce yourself I don't think you will need to improve in anything Please visit my blog here
Kia ora. I am Josh from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked the concept and how you put everything together. Maybe you could add a shadow of the plane or change the background to a sky
Hi My name is Jasher Im from Gis Int I really liked how infromational it was and how you did it i learnt how people can change images such like that Maybe you can make the plane bigger and put you inside.
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Ki ora. I am Leo from Gisborne Intermediate School I really like your photoshopped picture, it looked really cool and it was really creative. Maybe you could add a sky background so people think you are flying.
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Kia ora. I am Cassidy from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your photoshopped picture, it was very well made and pretty believable. Keep up the good work!
I learnt that your dad is a pilot. Do you usually go on flights with him? If so, do you have fun?
Maybe you could make the background up in the clouds next time to make it seem you're in the sky.
Please visit my blog here
Mā te wā,
Cassie
Hello there. I am Panth from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put effort in your work.
I found out how well you introduce yourself
I don't think you will need to improve in anything
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Panth
Kia ora. I am Josh from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the concept and how you put everything together.
Maybe you could add a shadow of the plane or change the background to a sky
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Josh
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ReplyDeleteHi My name is Jasher Im from Gis Int
ReplyDeleteI really liked how infromational it was and how you did it
i learnt how people can change images such like that
Maybe you can make the plane bigger and put you inside.
Visit my Blog at
https://gisintjashere.blogspot.com/
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ReplyDeleteKi ora. I am Leo from Gisborne Intermediate School
ReplyDeleteI really like your photoshopped picture, it looked really cool and it was really creative.
Maybe you could add a sky background so people think you are flying.
Please visit my blog
https://makaurileos.blogspot.com