Tuesday, 12 May 2020

Trapped

4 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Duncan
    I am enjoying the range of digital tools you are using to post blogs. A great idea to use your camera to record your book report. One suggestion would be to add a bit more detail to your summary...you really want to capture the interest of your audience so that they might be encouraged to read this book too!!
    I am happy you enjoyed this novel...an 81/2 is a great rating.
    Well done Duncan
    Mrs Bennett

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  2. I also meant to compliment you on your nice, clear speaking voice Duncan. Great pace and volume.
    well done!

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  3. Hi Duncan
    Your voice is nice and clear, a great way to record your book report. Well done Duncan. Mrs Bayley

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  4. Hi Duncan,

    I got excited when a saw a book with the little play symbol and liked the way you used a voice suited to being recorded. I too would have liked to hear a little more about the book even read a couple of pages that might hook someone else into reading this story.

    Mrs
    Allan

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about